Transcript

Paul wondered what Allen would see when he got into the city. He knew Allen would be overconfident, like he usually was.

He was.

Paul’s memory of the night was fuzzy, he wasn’t there and not everyone saw what had happened. Even the people that were there had their own version of the events the next morning.

At dawn, Paul read a news bulletin of the events. The paper read “MASSACRE, “MMMBOP” – A Tragic Choice” and had 4 black coffins illustrated on it, each with a skull and the initials of the people who had died that night. One of those initials was “A.W.”, for Paul’s best friend, Allen Williams.

Fighting back tears, it was then Paul realized times were changing. It was time to fight back.

Page 3
Posted on April 1, 2009 by Tina
Aw, man. It's only the third page and I've already killed someone off. Don't worry, you wouldn't know it but he's an unsavory fellow. It'll be okay, I had to do it. I like how I used the word "unsavory" incorrectly. [transcript display=styled]

13 thoughts on “Page 3”

  1. Loppi

    NOOO damn you Limeys!!! …wait.

    Poor lickle Paul :C

  2. fel13

    “MMMBOP” – A tragic choice

    :D

  3. Jesus

    ohh snapp! now its getting good ^_^

  4. Jesus

    well it’s not too say that it has not been already…does that make sense?

    1. Tina

      @Jesus – Haha, yeah, I know what you mean. I was excited for this page because the story really starts now. These first 3 pages were added after I wrote the script for Issue #1, but I thought about it for a while and decided that I did need them. This page is important.

      @Lianne – Yeah, he’s pretty cocky. We can’t have that.

  5. Lianne

    Wow, I didn’t know you were going to actually massacre them. @_@ That guy was a bit cocky, tho, and you know I don’t like arrogant types.

  6. SGYDK

    I don’t know why, but this guy reminds me of kamina from gurren lagann.

    anyhow, I didn’t see that coming at all. actually pretty sad.

  7. Jesus

    Good call on that one ^_^

  8. Kotora

    I should have started reading this sooner! It’s really really fun, I love the concept (so original!) and it really seems like you’re having fun with it! It’s certainly fun to read. Plus the thought of people being killed because of Hanson is amusing.

  9. SkulduggeryGirl13

    Allen= one of my fav ppl <3 very nice drama

  10. SkulduggeryGirl13

    ALLEN WILLIAMSSSSSSSSSS! WILLIAMSSSS lol sorry, don’t mind me

  11. hpkomic

    So was there blood on the mosh floor?

    1. Tina

      OH NO YOU DIDN’T!

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

*

*

*