Paul has the worst friends. However, I still think he prefers Warren and Toby over Johnny. I think… I mean, I would. I realize Paul is making a horrible face in that last panel. Let’s hope it doesn’t stay that way.
Fffffffffffffff indeed great stuff as always and I would not mind having any of those guys as my friends they would be fun to be around with
Haha, yeah. I bet Warren is pretty fun to hang out with. Probably not any type of formal gathering, however. :D
love the comic so far, such a cool idea!
Thank you! I just read through your comic too. I think Van and Warren were separated at birth or something… or at the very least, cousins of some sort.
They are CRAZY Identical, Warren just needs to get himself a butload of tattoos
Why do I get the feeling Margaret is gonna walk in on Warren with that girl? lol
I don’t think she’d be in any position to be upset about it. And besides, that red head is coming on to him.
pot pie OD
I was thinking more like a POT PIE MASSACRE or something. It’s not clear.
I got a little confused about what was going on in this page…too many medium shots. @_@ Who’s that guy with the paddle?
I guess that’s the downside of webcomics; you probably need to see all the pages in a row to help the narrative flow. Anywho, I do like the panels of Toby and Warren, and Paul’s face is AWESOME. I love crazy faces like that. XD
P.S. Sorry if I sound critical; I still am The Paul Reveres biggest fan (next to Johnny Tremain of course). <3
Yeah, medium shots are called it’s 3am and I need to get this page done. It’s also a thing I’ve always done when I’m being particularly lazy. I’ll pull out on the next page and hopefully things will make some sense.
When I had sketched out the page the first three panels were zoomed out and it did make more sense. Oh, and panel 5 used to have a shot of the whole scene that I zoomed in on individually in the last 4 panels.
I probably should have made this two pages. I was trying to jam-pack these pages because I went on a Johnny Tremain creep-o tangent that I didn’t actually plan from the beginning and now I have to make up time.
The guy with the paddle is the guy who owns the boat they will be taking in the next page. He’s going to have an ugly face too, probably. He’s only going to be in 2 pages or so.
Ah, ok. Your initial idea for the panels sounded awesome, but I don’t blame you for trying to get things out on time. I completely empathize with wanting to hit your deadlines. The fact you can continuously deliver on schedule is amazing; those types of comic artists are far and few in-between. :D
And I LOVE the Johnny Tremain “creep-o tangent”. He became a hilarious character, and I love how much of a creepster he is.
Instead of staying up ’til 3am, just find another job. ;)
The good thing about webcomics is that I can just post a new page on Friday and forget about this one existing.
Oh, I would like a new job. One that would pay me by the amount of hours I can sleep. There must be something like that.
Oh no… Panels six and seven…
THE PIES! D:
Snickerdoodle’s just feasting. xD
Oh wait. The red head, right. Is it just me, or does she look like she’s 12? ><
Crap, she does. Well, I’m 25 and look like I’m 12, so I’ll say it’s something like that. That way it’s not creepy, because it totally wasn’t intended to be like that.
There will be more pies on the next page.
dude, i can completely relate to paul xD
D: i feel sad…. my “A” key got knocked off so now i have to press this squishy button lol. i need to get my laptop fixed
Oh noes. I would hate to think that an actual human being has to put up with the same crap Paul does. That just isn’t right.
Yeah, I’ve had experiences with laptops with missing keys and keys that just don’t work. Having to cut and paste an “a” all the time is time consuming!
trust me. wen u have manfriends like mine. the question isn’t wats wrong? it’s “WATS NOT WRONG?” LOL xD
but yeah, missing keyboards are a pain xD
Your comic is awsome and hilarious.
Paul’s FFFFF face made my day. XD
Thank you! That face was so much fun to draw!
POOR PAUL I am starting to love him out of pity c:
Aww, kid just needs a hug from someone who’s not a stalker.
It’s official. Everyone in the 1770′s was on crack. Or at least these guys.
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